Friday 24 July 2015

writing



In the ancient days there was 7 men going in to a mine and it's winter its snowy and frozen .
the names  are Risso Richard Frank Alex Kaleb Callum and kaine. Richard  slips and falls
we all run to him the mine caves in the die cops come to investigate the mine is blending into the hill  the night comes 7 stares are so bright you can't look at them that's matariki
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  1. Unknown4 September 2015 at 21:42

    Kaines mum.....love this picture of the stars

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